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作者: Noland 时间: 2008-1-26 20:45 标题: 今天心情很差，在QQ上的随笔

I heal the world,leaving my heart broken.
Joyful Has drown on in the cold night
Before i say goodbye to my dear comrades
Hiding my feeling to keep myself controlled
Without any grief,without any sadness
I try to heal the world with no pretense
How I wish I could been with you
How I wish our happiness could last for good
But I enjoy all your smilings
It's enough in my life
Lovers and friens
Goodbye,my dear
Goodbye forever
Thanks Thanks a lot
Look forward to being reunion again
My dear,my friends,my lovers,my brothers,my comrades
Yours
Lengs

作者: 小叽 时间: 2008-1-26 23:18

How I wish I could been with you

这里可以用been??.........

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人,是个很麻烦的存在............
时间啦,感情啦,这种明明是很重要的东西,却如不绝的江河般向望不见的远方逝去.........
总想守护住什么,总相信自己能守护住.........
可是,身为人,又能做什么呢?.........

无所谓的正义,不存在的真理.............

[ 本帖最后由じ☆ve星星于 2008-5-14 18:03 编辑 ]

作者: 根茎叶花 时间: 2008-1-26 23:51

CAN 动词 BE 动词
就这么简单MS还有个表未来的时态~不管了
So just being thankful,no matter how sad I am
Or the world is only for the person who can open his or her heart~
That should called~i am loveless

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